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Hi I write poetry based upon my experience from the Christian perspective and of having a mental illness-bipolar depression. The mix of the subjects for me personally have met with both negative and positive feedback from all quarters. I have had books published and for honest feedback I will send you via mail the first section to read. Please email me on pud44uk@yahoo.co.uk

Here is a piece of my work

A Complicated Design

Life a complicated design, a web of intricate patterns,
encompassing me, within, somewhere
piece of starched white paper fluttered into my life
opportunity to grow, to push aside unseen boundaries
by doing so I need to risk, step out my comfort zone
having faith in self, Lord God, within essence of man.

Hello pud44uk.

I too write poetry and inspirational pieces from the christian perspective. I too suffered from mental illness never been diagnoised except by God. He was my great counselor and healer.

My subjects to have met with both positive and negative from all quadrants. I believe this is what makes us all unique and special. Some have a special experience in life where it is raw and ugly at times no matter how much you believe and have faith, but thank God we can rise above and get through it with out totally losing our minds i. e. split personality disorder etc. I think you get the picture.

Your work below is very similar to my work on all levels of the quarant. Allow me to post a piece of mine here and let me know what you think?

Princess Warrior

Princess Warrior
God teaches my hands to war.
I am His princess; I am His warrior.
Princess Warrior
I am a Princess Warrior in God�s great army.
I can fight and do fight to protect what is mine.
Princess Warrior
I am God�s Princess Warrior...
I am a Princess Warrior...
I am Victorious...
I Overcome...
Princess Warrior
I fight along side my brothers;
for freedom in Christ.
I strive for excellence;
in the name of my Father.
I aspire for compassion;
to give away to those who have none.
Princess Warrior
I am Strong, courageous, tenacious;
I Stands in the face of danger.
Princess Warrior
I am Royalty; I am a Princess by design.
I am the Daughter of the Most High God
I am a Princess Warrior in God�s great army

Hi Grace

I welcomed your 'nudge'. Your piece is strong, revealing your confidence in your relationship with Christ.