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Hi All,

Could you please check out my website and let me know what you think. I have never done anything like this before. It took me thirty days just to figure out what the heck computer language was!! Another 30 days to put together the site. So I would appreciate any suggestions. My site is www.devilscandy.com. It is a site that helps victims and users addicted to crack cocaine.

Thanks

Camille

OK, well you're not using HTML which I know or I'd personally be able to help a whole lot more. But there are two things that I can see straight away.

The first is that the dark red text at the top of the screen (a) looks out of place against the rest of the page which is carefully co-ordinated and (b) is very difficult to read. You'd be better off adding two more link buttons to that text and to the text under the Eye Candy heading, and making that text separate pages. People often don't scroll when they visit a new web site and may never see that text at the bottom of your page. The image header and buttons would make a very nice entry to a site on their own.

Great start, good luck!

I agree with Gillian's comments. It is a good start and you have obviously put alot of thought and heart/soul (I would suspect) into the content. Good for You!!

A good start and looks good. Black on red looks like it might be attractive but it is a little hard to read sometimes. But, your work shows effort and keep working with it. A lot of people never get as far as you have come so you are obviously making progress. Keep up the good work.

You have good content...All the bright colors are hard on the eyes and the pages are screaming - I think the last thing a crack addict would want or need is overstimulation. My opinion, but I would try a more soothing approach in regards to color scheme and graphics.
Hope this helps...you have a lot to offer those dealing with this addiction.

Charissa