hey ive been makin these poetries and id like to hear wot u guys think of it okee? here goes:
St. Paulo october 1st of 1992, 8am
here i am one last day
with teh flaming of my eyes
u dont kno wot its like
to walk with a gun aimin at ya head
u ever heard of lucifer?
yea that freak from hell?
he re-incarnated as me
hear me, at last im free
here comes the bus
damn im at last comin home
here i am on the first day
teh day my life began.
now hear this other one:
i only ask god a bit of freedom
cuz im a child, and so i dont kno the truth
i am a poet and didnt learn to love
maybe i am still a little boy
prayin low in the corners
bcuz i was a dirty dog
maybe my princess bcame so diferent
and lives anoyin my back
mayb life is nothing but a dream.
ta daaaaa *claps claps* <img src="/images/graemlins/laugh.gif" alt="" />
wadya think good or bad?