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Ok this is my very first attempt. Did I do it right?


Cold, crisp air
snowflakes falling
everything's pure


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YAY!

Now all the rest of you follow suit.

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almost as much as we love
velvet and chocolate.


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Final reminder! Send your poetry in here! The deadline is Friday!!

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I made a submission, Lisa - my first ever poetry publication submission!

Here are a couple non-autumn related Haikus I wrote today, hope you like them.

A tape for typing
files piled high on the desk
many letters typed.

(not sure about this one, I think it may have too many parts for a true haiku).

The baby sleeps
his gossamer skin
unblemished

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That's a lovely one Vance!

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