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#140811 10/11/02 06:20 PM
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tsego3 Offline OP
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I've got no reason to live,
I've got no more love to give,
There's nothing left to say,
I slowly feel my live slip away,
My heart has stopped beating,
The death are who I will be meeting,
As I picked up the gun,
My mind was on the run,
I placed it too my head,
In a few moments I would have been dead,
But then she came passing trough my mind,
She was the one real hard to find,
She was the one for me,
It was meant to be,
Shivers ran past my neck,
And the reason to live was back,
Now my heart is pounding like never before,
Cause I'm with the one I truly adore...


By Gerben van Eijk A.k.a. Gerbill

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#140812 10/12/02 05:40 PM
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When i started reading, in the first half i was shocks and thought that was wierd. But when i read the rest of it, i understood that the peom won't end with a tragic. That was a great poem. A wonderfully expressed poem, rhymes also.

I can't even write peoms unless i'm required to at school.

#140813 10/12/02 06:41 PM
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When I must write a poem at school it's gotta be in dutch and that I just can't the outcome is always a [censored] version of a childish song or someting' <img src="/images/graemlins/tongue.gif" alt="" />

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