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#140808 10/10/02 02:01 PM
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Hey y'all first time I've been to the poetry department, I once made a poem about death it was 10 pages weird huh, but how ya like this ?

You are perfection,
And my satisfaction,
That’s why I wrote this poem,
For all the people on Earth to show em,
How much I care,
About a woman with flare,
And the most beautifull smile,
And eyes that enter ones head for a mile,
It’s just undescribeable,
That you are so beautifull,
And your skin as soft as a feather,
It just all fits together,
And also on the inside,
All things are right,
I mean you’re nice and sweet,
You’ve got all the things I need,
Now you see that you are perfection,
And my satisfaction,
That’s why I adore you so,
That I’m never gonna let you go,
Your voice so heavenly,
Don’t you see that it’s our destiny,
That we belong together,
For ever and ever and ever...

That’s is how I feel about you,
I hope you’ll understant that it’s true

Well what did you think?

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#140809 10/11/02 04:56 AM
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That was wonderful, a great poem. I haven't read many poems lately or any good ones. But this, this one was good. <img src="/images/graemlins/smile.gif" alt="" />

#140810 10/11/02 12:01 PM
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Thank you very much <img src="/images/graemlins/laugh.gif" alt="" />


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