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#312600 - 05/10/07 05:31 PM The Adjective Game
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Registered: 10/11/05
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This week's article deals with editing out those pesky modifiers, beginning with Adjectives.

So, let's have some fun with this.

I'll start by providing a noun phrase containing two adjectives. The object of the game is to reduce the number of adjectives to one or even none if possible.

You can do this by just deleting one adjective and leaving one, OR by deleting both and selecting a single, better adjective, OR by changing the noun so that an adjective is no longer required to improve it.

Following your answer, provide us with a new noun phrase with two or more adjectives for the next round.

You will get 2 "points" for leaving us with just a noun, and 1 "point" for leaving one adjective. There are no prizes - this is just for fun. When we get tired of this game, I'll divide your points by the number of times you played, and we'll see who is the Adjective Killing King or Queen!

First up:

The bumpy, pot-holed road
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#312623 - 05/10/07 09:22 PM Re: The Adjective Game [Re: elle]
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"the trail"

Great idea for a game! Oh... good for writing skills, too. laugh
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#312654 - 05/11/07 12:39 AM Re: The Adjective Game [Re: hollyelise]
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Good work! That's 2 points.

Do you want to submit the next phrase? If you can't think of one, I'll post a new phrase tomorrow. (Two or more adjectives plus a noun)

The current phrase is still open for more answers if anyone still wants to have a go. (Holly too, if you're on a roll.)
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#312835 - 05/11/07 09:25 PM Re: The Adjective Game [Re: elle]
elle Offline
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Next up:

The huge, tall trees
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#313081 - 05/13/07 06:56 AM Re: The Adjective Game [Re: elle]
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Registered: 04/19/06
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Hi all,

I'm new here, this looks like fun. Let me give it a shot...

The California Redwoods

(I thought about the 2 points, but I liked the sound better with "California" there.)

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#313082 - 05/13/07 06:58 AM Re: The Adjective Game [Re: ClarkWriter]
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Here's my adjective phrase for next round:

"the mean, nasty man"

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#313174 - 05/13/07 05:55 PM Re: The Adjective Game [Re: ClarkWriter]
elle Offline
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Registered: 10/11/05
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Well done, 1 point. smile
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#313197 - 05/13/07 07:25 PM Re: The Adjective Game [Re: elle]
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the....lol mmm what words i could say here!!!

the ex-husband ?? lol not that i have one but...

the evil interloper? am i getting closer?



"the big bad wolf"


Edited by freebubbles3 (05/13/07 07:33 PM)
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#313255 - 05/14/07 03:17 AM Re: The Adjective Game [Re: freespirit]
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The Beast

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#313257 - 05/14/07 03:39 AM Re: The Adjective Game [Re: marisu]
elle Offline
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2 points each for Freebubbles and Marisu smile

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The bright, warm, sunny day
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