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#871979 07/24/14 07:54 AM
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I read an article that said all of your characters should have last names and they should be revealed in your story. It makes the reader care more. Even for minor walk on characters? What do you think?

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Hmmm...I don't know. Interesting. A surname can add a new dimension to a main character like suggest an ethnicity, and that's good. It can also make a main character seem more developed and realistic in certain genres like mysteries, mainstream fiction, romance, some science fiction, young adult, and anything set in a world like ours. But it might not apply for fantasy or historical fiction.

As for walk-on characters, maybe not. You might be telling the story in the deep third-person viewpoint of your main character and he'd have no way to know, or no need to find out, the surname of everyone with whom he has a brief encounter. He might not even know their first name, and just be thinking of them by a handy nickname. Stephen King does this a lot... T-Shirt Guy, Big Purse Lady, etc.

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Thank you Val. The story is an erotic vampire fantasy. I have characters like a waitress, bartender, best friend at the office...Ones that that are only mentioned once or twice and then they're gone.

It seemed like when I tried to slide surnames for the walk on characters it felt unnatural. These are people that the one of the main character knows well, so that's part of my dilemma.

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You're welcome, Jana. Glad I could help. smile


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