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#242657 04/12/06 08:41 PM
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Disclaimer: This poem is mine and mine alone and does mention incest and abuse. Feel free to feedback if you wish.









you're killing me
on the insides
where my heart is-
held in a box
with the tattered papers
of your will.

my name cut out
with exacto knives
slicing at the facade i built.
you mulch my hope
with honeyed words
hiding the poison you gave me-
condoning his touch and proposals
on bended knee asking for incest
how dare you?

i will rise
from the grave you dug for me-
pale of skin
& hard of heart.
stake me and I will rise again
burn me and i regenerate
you are nothing
and i love you.

fin


Illy
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I cAn PuT HanDlEs on LOts oF ThInGs
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#242658 08/09/06 12:13 AM
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girl you can write! thats all i am gonna say! thanks candy


If you are always trying to be someone else how can you be yourself?
So try and be yourself more everyday that way you will never lose who you are.
#242659 08/13/06 03:12 PM
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Thank you. It's cathartic to write about what happened to me. It's better than keeping it all bottled inside that's for sure.


Illy
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I cAn PuT HanDlEs on LOts oF ThInGs
#242660 08/13/06 09:24 PM
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Illy

Forget my last post where I ask if you have written other poetry...you just answered THAT question!

Incredible!


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#242661 08/21/06 10:14 PM
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Oh. Ok. :-)


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