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I thought I'd kick things off with some Horse Haiku. It's easy. 5 syllables, then 7, then back to 5.

Here's mine:

New horse at the barn,
Will they greet her or be shy?
Sound of whinnies; yes!
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four hooves pound the turf
gleaming coat and shiny mane....
canter in the rain - !!

EDIT
Normally, in haiku, the first and last lines should also be adequately sequential to stand on their own as just one line after the other....

That's brilliant! Far better than I can do. <img src="/images/graemlins/smile.gif" alt="" />